Today, successful (and single), she had moved on. But why was it pins still pierced her when she remembered watching his retreating back through her tears?
She paid for her uneaten meal and left on her high heels. Walking a little straighter than usual. Leaving her past behind. And the man, who had been unable to meet her gaze, exhaled imperceptibly and smiled a little wider, opening his mouth for another taste of chicken.
9 comments:
lovely Ana! you are back!
i absolutely love this. so beautifully written!
i really enjoy your writing. i wish to see more posts in the coming year. :)
Nice, Ana.
very nice Ana ..And sad .. is she still carrying a torch for him ?
Thanks everyone :)
Eve's Lungs - I don't think so. It's more about the girlishness she lost after that heartbreak. I think. At least, that's how I see her in my head!
Very nice!
Beautifully written :)
Lovely! I have missed you! Keep writing, okay?
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