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Pouring rain is so much prettier
Than staring at a laptop screen,
It takes your mind to green places
That may be unvisited, unseen.
My mind's divided as I alternate
Between laptop and window in turn,
If I look out the window I’m rejuvenated;
If I look at the laptop I earn.
9 comments:
Sheer distraction - the scene outside the window- clouds , rain,more clouds,crows,trees , breeze , a blue sky and cloud towers, sunset - more clouds now streaked with gold - how do I work ?
oh...we need the rain so bad! send some over....
Such fun! enjoy the rain:)
Indeed the promise of unvisited, unseen places! How our mind travels even as our bodies cannot. And love the rhyme: turn and earn :) What an unresolvable conflict.
Eve's Lungs: Exactly. Gorgeous description, by the way.
Suku: Wish I actually could.
Dipali: I am!
Seeker: It's quite a conflict. The window wins more often, though!
Loved this poem. Very apt!
well said
I would like to exchange links with your site righttowrite.blogspot.com
Is this possible?
Thanks people :)
Anonymous - does that mean you want this URL? Sorry, but I'm sticking to it. Hope you understand.
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