She lay next to him, a young bride, flushed and incredibly happy. He held up a coin. "This is the coin I tossed to decide whether to come home from the city when my parents said they had found me a bride. It told me to come home, and I did. And now I am with you."
She did not know what to say, except stare at him with all the love she could muster in her eyes. He was handsome, loving, and more understanding than she had been brought up to expect in her small patriarchal town. And he would remain loyal to her in 44 years of marriage, through difficult times, joblessness, complaining relatives, and occasionally ungrateful, always forgetful children.
Then one day, he was gone. She saved the coin, secreting it into her purse so that it would always be with her, to remind her of love, and what a matter of chance it was.
And now, it lay in the mud, slipped from her arthritic fingers. And all the world passing by could see was an old woman, stiffly bending to reach below a parked car, as a shining coin of no value lay just out of her grasp.
25 comments:
A beautifully simple tale
Of a coin belonging to a male
He turned out to be
Her best buddy
Forty four years is a sum to hail!
A very moving account! Keep alive your thoughts and continue writing.
All our blessings and love
Oh no I wish someone had picked it up for her. Very poignant .
Very touching. I hope someone got the coin out for her.
nice!
OOOHH !! it almost choked me...too touching...I shall remain lingering in it for some days...wonderfully presented.
Wonderful. Very touching, I could visualize it through the excellent piece of writing.
this is incredibly good imagery.. i loved this!!!!
But is it true?
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lovely ....
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right.
Choked me up completely....
very beautifully written..
Goosebumps, girl, goosebumps. And I'm not complaining.
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After a long time, I read something so poignant. Something so beautiful in its lyrical simplicity.
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Mystic: Good to hear from you again. Glady you liked this. It makes me sad to read it, the woman seems almost real to me.
Mystic: Good to hear from you again. Glady you liked this. It makes me sad to read it, the woman seems almost real to me.
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Wow! This was just too good! Am blogrolling you. :)
Blog-hopping does pay off eventually! Lovely imagery!
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Wow!
Very touching.
I almost sniffled.
Cheers,keep blogging! :)
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